Jan 28, 2013

Haiku and get Rescued


Haiku-1

Aim to shine with sun
scorned by work
Haiku -1
Rescued by the dusk
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Haiku-2

shrunken shivering soul
praying to heavens
Spring awaits to begin


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3 comments:

Kim Nelson said...

Your second haiku is packed with emotion, despite brevity

eof777 said...

This is a lovely haiku with a positive, hopeful message... I love the coming of spring.
Eliz

Manish Bhardwaj said...

Hi Eliz , thank you for visiting.
Love the coziness spring brings :)

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