Haiku and get Rescued

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Haiku-1

Aim to shine with sun
scorned by work
Haiku -1
Rescued by the dusk
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Haiku-2

shrunken shivering soul
praying to heavens
Spring awaits to begin


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Comments

Unknown said…
Your second haiku is packed with emotion, despite brevity
January 28, 2013 at 6:29 AM
Eliz Frank said…
This is a lovely haiku with a positive, hopeful message... I love the coming of spring.
Eliz
January 28, 2013 at 3:56 PM
Manish said…
Hi Eliz , thank you for visiting.
Love the coziness spring brings :)
January 31, 2013 at 7:40 PM
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